Okay, recently poetry has gone through our blogging community like a new strain of Covid.
How much of a story is lost when there is a need to rhyme?
Fitting in regular rhymes must determine the direction of the content.
Let me give you an example.*
I have two short concerts coming up in May where I will perform at two libraries. I will be playing solo on the double bass and the violin. I like to joke that the violin is just a little double bass that is tuned back to front, a bass is tuned E A D G and a violin is tuned G D A E. So, all you have to do, when you switch to the violin, is play everything backwards.
Okay, let's put that same information into a rhyming poem...
I don't need any bribery
To play solo music in a library.
Bass and fiddle have the strings
To play quite a few different things.
The bigger of the two has a big fat E
While the other starts with a higher low G
Are they front to back? Or back to front?
I guess I'll have to hunt.
If the fiddle goes higher than the bass,
That's just something I'll have to face.
* * *
Okay, it took me much longer to write the silly poem. It is not an economic way to get a message across. The need to rhyme means that one's thoughts can easily become less clear.
What are these flowers trying to tell you that couldn't have been simply said? |
* Please note well that any poetry that enters this post is not for any reason, other than to show how a message can be lost for the sake of a 'flowery' read.
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