"He said poems will be deleted on this blog. A statement that left me quite agog. Well then we'll put it to the test, And see if he thinks this is a pest. If it goes, then it goes, it doesn't matter, But if it stays, it shows, he's full of blather."
The Curmudgeon's poem? Yes, I know him. He's putting me to the test, He wasn't so brave with the kitchen request! Does he see this as an elevation, A bigger deal than a kitchen renovation? He says I'm full of blather When he has renovation tools to gather, Because, when the old girl grumps, He had better jump! And he knows it! Better luck next time, second class poet.
Hello. I'm a budding poet looking for somewhere to publish what, to me, is important verse. Now You are going to cut me off like all those other awful people who don't respect my gender choices?
Watch your grammar Robert. "Now You are going to cut me off like all those other awful people who don't respect my gender choices?" That second word shouldn't have a capital letter. Bad grammar always gives you away.
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"He said poems will be deleted on this blog.
A statement that left me quite agog.
Well then we'll put it to the test,
And see if he thinks this is a pest.
If it goes, then it goes, it doesn't matter,
But if it stays, it shows, he's full of blather."
The Curmudgeon's poem?
Yes, I know him.
He's putting me to the test,
He wasn't so brave with the kitchen request!
Does he see this as an elevation,
A bigger deal than a kitchen renovation?
He says I'm full of blather
When he has renovation tools to gather,
Because, when the old girl grumps,
He had better jump!
And he knows it!
Better luck next time, second class poet.
"Poems left as comments, on this post or any future ones, will be deleted."
I rest my case.
""Poems left as comments, on this post or any future ones, will be deleted."
I rest my case."
I hope that's not the case containing your kitchen restoration tools!
Careful matey!
"Hell."
You're lucky that's not a poem!
"Would Dante's Inferno be allowed?"
No.
* question mark supplied by RBB in the interests of good grammar
Jesus (Mary Magdalene's boyfriend)! You're getting grumpy in your old age.
Hello.
I'm a budding poet looking for somewhere to publish what, to me, is important verse. Now You are going to cut me off like all those other awful people who don't respect my gender choices?
- John (sorry) Jan.
Watch your grammar Robert. "Now You are going to cut me off like all those other awful people who don't respect my gender choices?" That second word shouldn't have a capital letter. Bad grammar always gives you away.
Richard (of RBB)
Sorry Rob, it was probably that old chap. He always forgets to proofread.
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